Here is the beginning of a screenplay I have been working on that I hope to get made into a movie that shows the highs and lows in the life of sales.
Gist: Best friends find themselves in similar life situations as they both have moved to Portland, Oregon. Both are married each with sons whom were born a week apart. They have embarked on new careers that are paying a fraction of where they were making a year previously mainly due to a way of life each wanted to live. Robert and his family, who moved from San Diego, California was more into the natural setting and bohemian vibe that the city of Portland evoked rather than the superficial air of southern California. Courtney and his family who moved from Boston, Massachusetts wanted to be closer to family as Portland offered a central location from his family in Washington to his family in California.
It parallels the struggle in each of their lives to maintain a level of security by providing a good life for each of their families and succeeding in their careers. The part of this movie I’m not sure about yet is the catalyst to where they end up making it. By making it, I want the viewer to see that they are both comfortable with there careers and have even got to a point where they are living out some of their dreams, i.e. playing golf once a week, going on nice vacations and generally not worrying about their financial situations. Will it be one cataclysmic event (both land whales of an account) or will it just be that they continue to put time aside to spend time with each other and strive to help the other succeed in their careers and home life.
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Scene One:
(Setting)
Two Men sitting at a table in a restaurant, the camera is focused only on their hands, holding their drinks, showing expensive watches, each wearing a suit, talking to each other, never showing above the chest on each man.
First Voice: What did Quentin say?
Second Voice: (He couldn’t remember.) (smirking)
First Voice: I think I’m right though
Second Voice: No way. I specifically remember that from the movie and he
definitely says “When Bonnie goes shopping she buys SHIT”
First Voice: Maybe.
Scene Two:
(Setting)
The camera focuses on the passenger seat and on the seat lies the 2001 Dr. Dre’s Instrumental CD. The cd is playing and track 4 “Still D.R.E” is playing in the background. As I’m driving down the road, the camera shows the reflection of the trees on the jewel case. Also lying next to the jewel case is an obscure book (House of Leaves) that will show up throughout the movie in subtle ways as to intrigue the viewer to notice but not make it super obvious. The narrative goes:
My Voice: I’m thirty-two years old, I’m married with a two year old son and one on the way. My family and I have just moved from Boston, Massachusetts to Portland Oregon to be closer to our families. I work as a Graphic Arts Sales Executive which is just a euphemism for a Print Salesman. It’s all about building relationships right? Fuck that! It’s more about being in the right place at the right time and acting on the luck that you’ve been given.
I thought I was destined for greatness but maybe my greatness isn’t synonymous with fame and fortune. Is this all there is? What am I going to do?
Gist: Best friends find themselves in similar life situations as they both have moved to Portland, Oregon. Both are married each with sons whom were born a week apart. They have embarked on new careers that are paying a fraction of where they were making a year previously mainly due to a way of life each wanted to live. Robert and his family, who moved from San Diego, California was more into the natural setting and bohemian vibe that the city of Portland evoked rather than the superficial air of southern California. Courtney and his family who moved from Boston, Massachusetts wanted to be closer to family as Portland offered a central location from his family in Washington to his family in California.
It parallels the struggle in each of their lives to maintain a level of security by providing a good life for each of their families and succeeding in their careers. The part of this movie I’m not sure about yet is the catalyst to where they end up making it. By making it, I want the viewer to see that they are both comfortable with there careers and have even got to a point where they are living out some of their dreams, i.e. playing golf once a week, going on nice vacations and generally not worrying about their financial situations. Will it be one cataclysmic event (both land whales of an account) or will it just be that they continue to put time aside to spend time with each other and strive to help the other succeed in their careers and home life.
UNTITLED
Scene One:
(Setting)
Two Men sitting at a table in a restaurant, the camera is focused only on their hands, holding their drinks, showing expensive watches, each wearing a suit, talking to each other, never showing above the chest on each man.
First Voice: What did Quentin say?
Second Voice: (He couldn’t remember.) (smirking)
First Voice: I think I’m right though
Second Voice: No way. I specifically remember that from the movie and he
definitely says “When Bonnie goes shopping she buys SHIT”
First Voice: Maybe.
Scene Two:
(Setting)
The camera focuses on the passenger seat and on the seat lies the 2001 Dr. Dre’s Instrumental CD. The cd is playing and track 4 “Still D.R.E” is playing in the background. As I’m driving down the road, the camera shows the reflection of the trees on the jewel case. Also lying next to the jewel case is an obscure book (House of Leaves) that will show up throughout the movie in subtle ways as to intrigue the viewer to notice but not make it super obvious. The narrative goes:
My Voice: I’m thirty-two years old, I’m married with a two year old son and one on the way. My family and I have just moved from Boston, Massachusetts to Portland Oregon to be closer to our families. I work as a Graphic Arts Sales Executive which is just a euphemism for a Print Salesman. It’s all about building relationships right? Fuck that! It’s more about being in the right place at the right time and acting on the luck that you’ve been given.
I thought I was destined for greatness but maybe my greatness isn’t synonymous with fame and fortune. Is this all there is? What am I going to do?
PLEASE FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE WITH ANY FEEDBACK THAT YOU MAY HAVE
4 comments:
Hey...You posted this without your editor's approval?
Ha, unfortunately my editor's a deadbeat and never got back to me with any editorial review.
Have you ever read any of Paulo Coelho's books?
Seana, I have heard of "The Alchemist" but I haven't read any of his works. Are they good?
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